DragonGirl: Broken Legacies Pg 3

 Constructive criticism would be amazingly helpful and useful, (especially on the form/presentation of the panels/comic page layout and how the story flows through them, is it clear ti understand? etc...) as thats what this is for and how am I going to improve otherwise? :L

This sequence is set in the future/present of the story, and so is distinguished by the black and white, whereas other parts of the story continue in almost 'flashbacks' of the past/present which show how the events in the future have unfurled.
Still working out how much they are used/separated etc... hope that sort of makes sense xD

 Heres a little blurb to try frame some of the ideas of the story.... x3

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How can a life change so quick? And with a single horrific event the world around it as well. Bryony Wilson's small bubble of normality is ruptured as she's dragged into the aftermath of a violent biochemical attack that has seemingly come out of nowhere. With its origins and effects unknown, the devastation left in its wake allows the rapid rise of the criminal underbelly. A mysterious online figure known only as Façade sees Bryony and this new devastation as an ideal opportunity....and makes her a proposal she can't refuse...
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Emjoy!! 

Artwork, concepts and characters (c) Rebecca Elise Smith, me (aka DragonGirl787)